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Non Omnis Moriar Chapter I
La Mer
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I am being brave and posting this chapter here to get a bit of opinion on my little novel. It's the first, so no one will be lost. Depending how this little experiment goes I might post another as we go along. I need feedback, and I figure this is a safe place to get it as any. Be honest, tell me what works, doesn't work, needs clarification, what you liked, what you didn't, whatever.

Thanks so much for looking.


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